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Oct. 14th, 2005 07:51 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
rimturseRevised 6 pages today! I am getting a bit concerned about the amount of snipping, though. The last draft of Hunt was approx. 120.000 words. Now I might be looking at 70-80.000 words. I hope, I won't go lower than that. Isha and Ciodaru had a very long conversation while I was doing the dishes. I guess they reasoned that since my brain activity was at a minimum, they'd might as well use the vacant space. Bottom line of conversation was:
Isha: "Die! Die! Die!"
Ciodaru: "Now, you know we can't do that, dear."
Adric is too depressed to be talking much. He'll have a man-to-man talk with Ciodaru in the following chapters. It won't make him feel any better.
PS. Just a little over two weeks till kitten will be moving in.
Isha: "Die! Die! Die!"
Ciodaru: "Now, you know we can't do that, dear."
Adric is too depressed to be talking much. He'll have a man-to-man talk with Ciodaru in the following chapters. It won't make him feel any better.
PS. Just a little over two weeks till kitten will be moving in.
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Date: 2005-10-15 12:01 am (UTC)I love character conversations! And don't stress about the snipping. The book knows how long it should be :) Remember, I ended up cutting 40,000 words from Apprentice!! (granted, it was 160,000 words long...but that's not the point!!)