Elpida

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Since I've been feeling exhausted from yesterday's ick and sick, I treated myself to a semi-day off. Answered e-mails, packed orders and sent them, and then came back to play with Lia and write. This means chapter 2 is uploaded to the OWW. It's rough and needs work, but it should be readable and I have some concerns about it, so it will probably be better to get feed-back before polishing. :)

EDIT: Ouch! First reviewer did not care for it, but at least he wrote why he didn't like it, so there's something to work with.