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[rimturse]

Whee...worked on the Hunt. Made a plot outline where I cut scenes and characters. Followed the Dwight W. Swain advise of writing down my characters' main cares and their challenge. Lochar, Naina, Isha and Rune were no problem. Took me a long time to formulate something for Adric, though. His challenge was obvious, but his main care in relation to that challenge was diffuse. This is probably WHY he hasn't come across very strongly on paper. I've also decided on a lot of minor changes and am ready to roll again! :)

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[everyonesakitty.livejournal.com]

eee! sounds very cool! glad you made good progress!

[frigg.livejournal.com]

I'm very pleased with myself. Now I am just waiting for mother-in-law to leave so I will have the time to implement the fixes. :)