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[rimturse]

Chapter 5 is a bloody struggle. I'm considering some serious snipping, more so than I've done already, but will post to the workshop first to see the reader response to that. Now, if I had known about writing before starting this story, I would have written down the story progress and not just stumbled blindly hither and dither. Then I wouldn't have had this problems now. Lesson learned.